With's students regarding revision. My students are very good at editing. They can easily and quickly correct their own homework, that of their peers and the teacher's mistakes. However, they struggle to correct simple errors on their own papers. For example, not capitalizing the “I” or missing a simple punctuation mark like a period. However, when it comes to revising, I feel like I'm in a room of hibernating bears. They're all asleep and I don't dare wake them up otherwise I might be there for lunch! Therefore, I would like to create a lesson similar to Ms. With's, with my students. I'm curious to see if they clearly know the difference between editing and