One of my favorite essays that I wrote was about the helping process. I wanted to explain why the aid process was important and how people could benefit from it. I felt I did a good job of drawing the reader in with an anecdote. It described how a girl had been raped. I detailed it very well describing everything that happened, like "He found her on the ground, knocked her unconscious, took her to an alley and brutally raped her" (Help 1) . This showed my ability to really interest the reader in my subject and not bore them. It also featured my vivid descriptions of the event so the reader could imagine it happening for themselves. Finally, an important strength I possessed in this writing was my organization of ideas. The paragraphs flow very well from one idea to another without the reader