What a struggle. Most of the time I get low grades in my essays because of the sentence structure and punctuation of not revising my essay after writing it. For example, I struggled with mechanical errors in the essay "The Three Major Methods" because I did not use a "formal tone", which "omits personal pronouns", which were not necessary . Additionally, another comment I had in the same essay was "revise your work", which explains why I had mechanical errors, because if I had revised my paper before submitting it, I would have had fewer errors due to correcting my mistakes before submitting my paper. paper (“The Three”). Therefore, one way to improve this weakness may be to reread my essay more than once and check my punctuation, as mechanical issues may be easy to fix; to add, reading other articles could also help me develop my weakness of poor sentence structure, which can help in finding the right tone for each sentence, which can develop the main idea I want transmit without using unnecessarily