In this essay, the main difficulty I encountered was not being able to discuss a topic statement in a single paragraph. On each paragraph there was a confusing idea that it was difficult for a reader to fully understand the main message of each paragraph. The other difficulty I encountered was using proper punctuation. I tried to solve these problems by reading English punctuation resources and also through the wonderful feedback I received from my teacher. Additionally, during the process of developing this essay, I learned different steps of writing an organized essay. From brainstorming, drafting, proofreading and editing. These steps have been a useful tool in writing a wonderful